tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810991750799183100.post6530828636633313739..comments2023-10-23T00:49:48.966-04:00Comments on Just Like the Nut: Lessons on Great StartsLindaBudzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09290094983584931044noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810991750799183100.post-60816826353656519912008-02-03T22:56:00.000-05:002008-02-03T22:56:00.000-05:00Thanks, Coil! I see that Nathan has posted his fin...Thanks, Coil! I see that Nathan has posted his finalists ... shockingly, I am not among them (hah!). It's been fun to enter, though. The six finalists are all pretty amazing. I will have to check out Soul Jar.<BR/><BR/>I am actually going to change my plans a little and give opinions on the first 8-10 sentences, as I think that will make it a little easier to get a feel for the writing and the story. So ... if you don't mind leaving a few more sentences of your piece, that would be great. (BTW, intriguing first sentence!).LindaBudzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09290094983584931044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810991750799183100.post-82895941292754885332008-02-03T19:58:00.000-05:002008-02-03T19:58:00.000-05:00After posting, I saw that the first word needs cha...After posting, I saw that the first word needs changing from I'm to I was.<BR/><BR/>Duh.<BR/><BR/>CollAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4810991750799183100.post-70768391603366380992008-02-03T19:55:00.000-05:002008-02-03T19:55:00.000-05:00Loved your potato kid entry. Mine is Soul Jar.I fi...Loved your potato kid entry. Mine is Soul Jar.<BR/><BR/>I finished reading through them this weekend and picked my top thirty or so. Be interesting if one of my picks wins.<BR/><BR/>Here's the first sentence of my WIP.<BR/><BR/>I’m not the daughter my mother had wished for as I grew in her womb all those years ago --- Lillith Marie was no trophy child. <BR/><BR/>CollAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com